Looking for Feedback on Sample Adventure
Hi all... I'm posting the current draft of the Sample Adventure chapter from the Moebius…
This week, I want to talk a bit about a redesign I’m pondering for the One Spot products. Each one to date has covered two 8 1/2 x 11″ pages pretty completely. The “GM View” page may even be overly packed, considering that the relationship table that runs along the outside margin is barely readable electronically due to the fact that it changes direction depending on which side it’s on. That lack of “white space” was mentioned in Mike Bourke’s review at Campaign Mastery along with some ideas on how to expand to fill a third page to fill the extra space.
The biggest reason to make this layout change is to move the map to a page where it’s more useful. Currently the map comprises about 1/4 of the GM’s View page and is not exactly the easiest thing to read. By expanding it to a half page, adding a map key, and perhaps adding some description for particular locations on the map more along the lines of a game module, I think that will address those comments. Something along the lines of the image to the right (click to embiggen).
At the same time, that offers some opportunities for additional expansion of the rest of the details as well. By moving the map, that opens up some space so we can add more about NPCs and potential plots. And if we add a fourth page, we can perhaps move all of the different tables to it. For instance, with Hand’s Goods we could move the “Relationship Hooks” table from the border of the GM page to a more readable space along with the “Potential Encounters” list, while perhaps adding a list of items you might find on the shelves.
Another idea came from a discussion this week about single-column vs. two-column layouts and the difficulties with reading two-column pages electronically. Perhaps instead of cramming all of this information into a couple of pages, I should expand it for easier reading and make it all a single column affair. What do you think?
Regardless of how this shapes up, I anticipate making more use of tables and white space instead of in-line text. Anybody know how to format a good looking table in InDesign? Or a good tutorial? What makes a “good looking” table vs. one you’d rather gouge your eyes out than read?
Lots of options to explore. Plenty to ponder. Looking forward to any feedback you may have. Thanks in advance!